Tagline: "The terror of hearing blood curdling screaming in the night... with a twist."
The Scream
I can’t take it any more,
Crying out in self defense…
I turn, run to the door
Away from sounds intense.
A bloodless, fearful screaming
I surely know of its intent.
Yes, I fear I know it’s meaning
The goal on which it’s bent.
And then I hear the wailing,
Piercing bone and mark
No other sound prevailing
Spewing forth out of the dark.
Dare I heed its calling?
„Dare I not“ the quick reply.
And now it’s simply bawling -
I must go or else I’ll die.
I stand and feel my weakness,
As one condemned to death
I stagger in a bleakness
To the sound of my last breath.
There’s no other motivation,
Blind obedience is my thrust.
I stumble to my salvation
Ashes to ashes, dust to dust.
And then my eyes perceive him
And my heart it melts with love.
All I want to do is please him
And so I slip on a glove.
Gagging at the awful smell,
I wash away his sin
And now my son it seems can tell…
The nappy’s in the bin.
I did NOT expect that ending!!! Love it!
ReplyDeleteThank you Jemi!
DeleteThat certainly was a surprise ending! Well played. 😀
ReplyDeleteThanks Debbie
DeleteThanks for the unexpected (and very welcome) smiles.
ReplyDeleteI love making people smile!
DeleteWhat a wonderful twist ending. Great little poem.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Olga
DeleteCarole, and here I was thinking I was reading about DV and then the surprise ending! Wonderful entry for The Scream!
ReplyDeleteThank you Denise - what is DV?
DeleteThanks Carol. Great narrative poem and loved the comic twist at the end.
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it Susan
DeleteI laughed at the end. A diaper... what a lovely descriptions.
ReplyDeleteShalom aleichem
Thanks Patty - glad that the Americans reading got that a Nappy is a Diaper!!! Nappy is short for Napkin which makes sense - what does Diaper mean?
DeleteHi Carole - I did wonder ... but wasn't quite expecting that ending. An interesting poem with a great lead towards its denouement. Cheers Hilary
ReplyDeleteI had so much fun writing it Hilary - knowing the ending I could make it as horrible and frightening as I wanted!!!
DeleteTruly well done! Love the ending - humor wins out!
ReplyDeleteThanks Yolande. yes! Humour ALWAYS wins out!
DeleteGreat poem with a massive surprise ending. Loved reading...thanks for the smiles and this fun entry!
ReplyDeleteMy pleasure Nilanjana - so glad that you were surprised!
DeleteHi Miss Carole.
ReplyDeleteWow, what a great poem. Kept me wondering what would happen. Scary right up to the surprise ending. I laughed out loud for real at the cool twist. Ha ha. Thanks for a fun read.
Thank you Lenny. Glad that it made you laugh!
DeleteYour poetry flows well, and I enjoyed the mounting tension. Like everyone else, I did not see that ending coming. Well done!
ReplyDeleteSuch a fun twist! Nice poetic verse and such and unexpected ending!
ReplyDeletePerfection! I felt that coming, how sad I knew it all to well!
ReplyDeleteHi Carol
ReplyDeleteA screaming fantastic poem. The end was unexpected. Great job.
Nancy
Chuckle! Odd, as I was following a school children's walk along a path from the shops the other day, and something made me think of how we teach kids what caring for someone is. And I could only think of the example of doing things like changing a nappy, because you want to care for the baby.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written :)
Carol, what a delightful poem. After all the drama and tragedy that this prompt called forth ( my story too) this was such a pleasure to read. I needed that belly laugh.
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